Sunday, December 13, 2015

Alani (part 12)

The last time we saw the gang, they were at school, when Jordan told them her idea.

The gang was silent in thought. 
Where should we start? Andy asked himself.
"I got it!" shouted Jordan.
"We should ask around school. There has to be somebody here who knows him." explained Jordan.
"Great idea!" said Andy.

Suddenly, they heard a voice from the table behind Andy. 
"My brother knows who he is. He happens to have the same last name as you, Andy." said a girl with glasses and freckles. "Would you three like to come over?" 

The three friends looked at each other all saying the same answer, yes.

"Alright," said Andy, "Meet us at the bus stop at the front of the school."

At the front of the school... 

"We take the third bus. We might have to wait a while..." the girl said.
"That's okay. By the way, what's your name?" asked Andy.
"My name is Alani. " said Alani.

I might not be blogging for the next four weeks. I'm sorry. I will try though! :)

Wednesday, December 2, 2015

An idea (part 11)

The last time we saw the gang, they were talking to Mr. Dale until Jordan knew where to find Chris.
The gang wak out to the principle's office and out of the building.
"What is your idea, Jordan?" asked Andy.
"I'll tell you guys tomorrow at school. I need to get home. It's almost 7! Bye guys!" said Jordan hopping on her bike and riding off.
"What do you think her idea is?" asked Jake staring off into where Jordan was.
"I'm notsure, but we better get home too. It is getting pretty late..." said Andy also hopping on his bike getting ready to ride off, waiting for Jake.

The next day at school...

"Okay, Jordan, time for you to tell us what your idea was." said Andy.
"Okay, so we know he went to Palm Tree University, right? We also know that he moved out a few days ago, so that means that he has to be staying at an apartment because the principle never said anything about him working." said Jordan, triumphantly.
"Or he could be living in his mother's basement." said Jake in a see-you-are-wrong tone.
Jordan then punched him hard, but playfully in the arm.
"Okay, maybe not, but where do we start?" asked Jake.

Sunday, November 29, 2015

The Principle (part 10)

The last time we saw Andy was at Palm Tree University and Andy and his friends had to see the principle.

"Ummm, let me see if he is available." said the lady at the front desk named Linda.
She checked a calendar and then called him to confirm it.
"Alright! You can go! Down the hall to the left. You can't miss it!" replied Linda happily.
The gang headed down the hallway to find a door that says PRINCIPAL on it. They opened up the door and was greeted with a kinda old man. A man in his 40s or 50s.
"Hi! My name is Dale. I'm known around here as Mr. Dale. Nice to meet you!" greeted Mr. Dale.
"Hi! I'm Jordan and this is Jake and Andy."
Andy and Jake both waved. All four sat down on the chairs and then Jordan got serious.
"Do you know anyone named Chris? We need help on our complicated geography homework and we hoped that maybe he could help us? Do you know him or his whereabouts?" asked Jordan.
"Chris... well, Chris was here, but he moved out a few weeks ago. Really confidently too... Like he had better things to do. We were all sad, we he was a really smart kid, but was really mysterious." said Mr. Dale and shook his head sadly.
"Well, thank you for helping! I think I have an idea where to look." replied Jordan after a moment of silence.
"Hope you find him! Good luck!" said Mr. Dale opening the door for them.


Sunday, November 15, 2015

Principle search (part 9)

The last time we saw Andy, he was at Palm Tree University. Jake was walking away. 

"Jake, don't be such a scaredy cat!! Be a man." shouted Jordan, showing off her biceps to emphasize the 'be a man part'.
"What? I can't hear you over my heart beating really fast." shouted Jake.
Jordan walked over and grabbed Jake's arm and dragged him to the university.

Inside, it didn't seem run-down at all! It actually looked like a university. In front of them, was a map of the school and a sign that read,' sorry! We are under construction.'
Jordan whistled a low whistle. "Wow. Nice place."
Andy noticed a guy walking by.
"Hey, let's go ask this guy for the principle of this place." suggested Andy.
The guy noticed them walking over and stopped to say hi.
"I'm Mike. Are you looking for someone?" asked Mike.
"Actually we are," responded Andy, "do you know where the principle is?"
" Yeah, come follow me to his office. He's a really great guy." said Mike walking away. The gang followed Mike to this nice lobby looking place.
"The principles office is had way down the hall to your left. You will see the sign above the door. You have to check in with the lady over there," said Mike pointing to the lady at the desk," or else the principle will take you the wrong way. Like an intruder or something."
"Thank you!" said Jordan walking over to the lady Mike was pointing at.
"Hi! Could we please see the principle?" asked Jordan to the lady, named Linda.

What do you think the principle say? Do you think Linda will let them see the principle? Find out in the next blog!

Sunday, November 8, 2015

The university (part 8)

The last time we saw the gang, they went to the library only to get stuck with another question, who is Chris?

"So Chris." Said Andy.
" Yeah, we know very little about him. Where should we start?" asked Jordan in a desperate voice.
" Maybe we should try the Internet. He has to be somewhere!!" offered Jake.
" Wow!! That's the best idea he has had all year!" exclaimed Jordan sarcastically.
"Thanks!" beamed Jake in a proud voice.
Jordan just rolled her eyes at that comment.
" Let's do it now. " said Andy.
With that, they all whipped out their phones and typed the name 'Chris' into the search engine.
" I didn't get anything." said Jordan in a depressed tone.
"Same here" said Andy in the same depressed tone.
" Look! I found the word history and Chris in the same article!!" exclaimed Jake.
Jordan quickly took the phone and typed in the URL into her phone.
"Yeah, this is it!!" exclaimed Jordan in a surprised tone.
" Well, what does it say?!" exclaimed Andy in an anxious tone.
"It says that he goes to plam tree university and that he majored in history. This article was posted over a year ago and the article says that Chris didn't want his last name in the paper for unknown reasons." read Jordan
" So that means that he must have been planning this for over a year now. Maybe he's still at the university. Let's go." said Andy.
"Hey, where's Jake?" asked Jordan, looking around.
"There he is! Waiting in line for... Ice cream. " said Andy in a depressing tone.
Jake waved at them as Jordan stomped over there to pull him out of line.

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After getting lost 20 times, retracing their steps 10 times, and chasing after Jake 30 times, they finally reached Palm Tree University!

"Well, here it is! Palm Tree University." said Andy.
"It looks run down, like it hasn't been used in 20 years!" exclaimed Jordan.
"Should we go inside? Maybe it's the wrong building." said Jake walking away.

Should they go inside? Find out in the next blog!!

Saturday, October 31, 2015

A Start (part 7)

The last time we saw Andy was at lunch when he and his friends were decoding the note.

The group sat in silence. They didn't know where to start looking.
"I know!" exclaimed Andy.
"What?!" asked Jordan and Jake at the same time.
"We can look at the way the letter was written!" explained Andy.
"Well," said Jordan, " The person has to know a lot of history to recreate the world's biggest problems."
"So the person should have access to a lot of books. " said Jake.
"Exactly, I know exactly where to look." said Andy, "Meet me at the library after school."

After School...

"How do you know that the person who wrote the note comes to this library? There are so many libraries in just the town! Not to mention the whole city!" exclaimed Jordan.
"I have to agree with her on this now, Andy." explained Jake.
"Well, this library has the most information about history, plus how can they be watching me and knowing me if they live far away? Anyways, this is where all universities get their history books. It must be the place!" Andy explained.
All of them walked into the library.
"Let's ask the librarian. This librarian takes note of people who come here daily." whispered Andy.
"Hello? Are you a librarian?" asked Jordan in a too-of-a-sweet-tone.
"Why, yes I am. How may I help you?" the librarian asked.
Her name is Judy.
"Hi! I'm Jordan, this is Jake, and this is Andy. We are here to ask you some questions, if that's okay..." asked Jordan.
"Of course that's alright!", said Judy with a smile, "Fire away!"
" Alright, how long have you been working here?" asked Jordan.
"I've been working here ever since it opened. Ever since then, I have been noticing people who come here daily. Most of them, wonderful people, but some of them aren't as kind." said Judy in a sad tone.
"Do you know their names?" questioned Andy.
"Well, there is only one. His name Chris. That is all I know! He doesn't come with any friends and seems mysterious and just blends in. He checks-out some weirds books that people on glance at. He looks at the books in the reference section. Really weird, huh?" asked Judy.
"Yeah, it is. Well, thanks for answering our questions! See you later!" said Jordan.
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" Well, at least we got some where." said Jordan.
"Yeah, but we just got stuck with another question, who is Chris?" said Jake.

Can you answer Jake's question? Try to in the comments! Have an awesome week!

Sunday, October 25, 2015

Looking at the details (part 6)

The last time we saw Andy was in the hall way having a strange vision. What did that vision mean?

"Woah!" exclaimed Andy.
Jordan and Jake caught Andy and exclaimed, "Are you okay?"
"I'm fine." said Andy.
"'I'm fine' is the shortest phrase that people use when they are lying." informed Jordan.
"Thanks for catching me." said Andy.
"No problem, but are you sure you are okay?"asked Jordan.
"Yeah, I'm fine." said Andy.

Bring! Bring!

"The bell rang, we are late to first period, great." said Jake.
"Would you stop complaining and help me take Andy to the nurse?!" exclaimed Jordan.

At lunch...

"So about the note..." said Andy, in a low tone.
"Let's try taking it apart."suggested Jordan.
Jake and Andy looked at her like she was crazy.
"Like trying to figure out what the first line means and then the second one, and so on and so forth." said Jordan in a tone that said duh.
"Well, the first line says 'you will never find me, but I will always find you.'" read Andy.
"That means that it must be somebody you used to know, but probably forgot about." said Jordan.
"Or that could mean that it is someone that you know, but we just wouldn't think of as a suspect." said Jake.
"I'm not sure, those are both really good ideas." said Andy.

Do you think Jordan's idea is accurate or Jake's idea is accurate? Stay awesome!

Sunday, October 18, 2015

Chemistry (part five)

The last time we saw Andy was at school with Jordan and Jake trying to find out who JRC is.

"I don't know, I was hoping that you guys would've recognized it." said Andy in a disappointed tone.
Bring! Bring!
"Well, there's the bell... Who do we have next?" asked Jordan.
"Umm, we are suppose to be having Mr. S, chemistry, but everyone is saying that there is a creepy new sub." informed Jake.

In Chemistry...

"Everyone, please take your seats quietly." said the sub.
Wow! He looks like he's in college! I've never seen a sub this young! Andy thought. Why do I think that I've seen him before? Andy questioned himself.
"Today, we will not be doing any textbook work, instead, I would like to do some hands on experiences. Starting off, I would like to go over some rules for how to make the stuff I'm teaching you: just follow exactly what I do. First of all, grab your green vile and only put a drop, like this." explained the sub. "Then pour all of the blue vial into the jar with the one drop of green. Finally, add some of the red vial in, stir and then I will come around and collect these."
Hmmm, mine keeps changing colors, I've never seen anything like it. observed Andy. Andy finally saw boxes with the other period's numbers on them. Each period's was different. That's strange! Why wouldn't he do the same experiment of all classes? Andy thought.
Bring! Bring!
"Thank you everyone! Goodbye!" said the sun in a weirdly sweet tone.
He quickly ushered out all the kids and quietly closed the door behind him. Jordan and Jake walked with Andy.
"Isn't it weird that he never gave us his name like normal subs?" asked Jordan.
"Yeah, kinda creepy huh?" said Jake.
"I felt like I knew him... I've seen him before." said Andy.
Andy suddenly got a huge, overwhelming rush of energy and started seeing another vision!
Andy's mom was there with his dad. Andy's mom was pregnant. 
"I can't believe I'm going to be a father! It's going to be a son-son-father day when they can walk and talk!" exclaimed Andy's father. 
"Very exciting indeed! But, we should go get some rest." wearily said Andy's mom. 
Andy's mom gave her husband a kiss goodnight and slowly made her way up stairs. 
Andy fell and came back to reality with a hazy mind.

What do you think that vision means? Comment down below! Thanks!

Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Quick Escape (part 4)

The last time we saw Andy was when he was in his closet, hiding and "spying" on the three "police" guys.

Andy had tho think fast. Andy, searching his brain, trying to remember anything that would help him. Oh right! Jake said to use the things around you to survive!, remembered Andy. Andy looked around and saw a baseball bat, his homework, his card collection, and a blanket! He lifted up a blanket and found a guitar case, with no guitar! Right! I remember that guitar! I broke it... Anyways, I should just take out the foam and... Andy got inside! He was sweating and his breathing was hard. Take control of your breathing, he told himself. He slowed his heart beat and he breathed slower. He listened to what was going outside the closet.

*Hello, Sir! (clicked heels together)
^Same to you boys, but what are you doing here? Get your butts out to the perimeter! This was already checked!
#We are very sorry sir! 
%Yeah, yeah, sorry!
^JUST GETS YOUR BUTTS OVER THERE!
*#% Sir, yes, sir!
(* is the first unknown guy, ^ is the chief, # is the second unknown guy, and % is the third unknown guy)

Whew! They're gone! I can finally get out! He got out easily and quickly and continued on with the rest of the day like everything was normal.

The next day...
"Jordan, Jake! I have something really important to tell you!" yelled Andy.
"What?!" shouted Jordan and Jake.
"Well... (Andy told them about the happenings in the closet) And that was that!" exclaimed Andy!
"Wow! who is JRC?" asked Jordan.

Can you answer Jordan's question? Stay tuned for next week! Smile more and stay awesome!

Wednesday, September 30, 2015

The note.

Last time we saw Andy was at his house talking to a police man about the guy in all black.

Andy carefully sneaked away from the crowd. He looked around his house carefully for clues, careful not to get caught. When he couldn't find anything downstairs, he went upstairs. He checked everywhere but his room. I wonder if he left anything in here, thought Andy. Of course he did, thought Andy, sarcastically. On the wall was a note attached to the wall with a bloody arrow. Andy put the arrow in the plastic bag and read the note. It said: You will never find me, I will always find you. You didn't help me, so I abandoned you. You are very dead to me. So if you don't get the things at the bottom of this list, I will kill innocent people by recreating some of the worst possible disasters and make them worst just for you! It was signed with the initials JRC at the bottom along with the list: a sea man's beard, the hat of a king, and the gun of a soldier. JRC?, thought Andy, who could that be? I'll just have to show Jake and Jordan tomorrow and see what they think. Then, he heard foot steps down the hall and quickly hid in his closet.
"Finally, a good place to talk. Now, let's talk about the plan."
"Okay,  Jorge, but we aren't going to say anything."
"Yeah! Not say anything!"
"After everyone leaves, we are going to burn this place to the ground. There is to much evidence around here! It'll give him away!"
"Let's do it at 12:00! No person will be up at that time! Take guns too to shoot anyone that sees us! And make sure they are dead!"
More footsteps.
"Quick! Act like you are searching the place!"
Oh no!, thought Andy, they are going to find me!

What will happen to Andy? Will he get caught? Who is JRC? Find out in the next story! As Roman Atwood would say: "Smile more!".

Wednesday, September 23, 2015

The visions (the part 2 of The Story)

Disclaimer: Thanks to the seven people that looked at my last blog! You guys are awesome! Now, time for the story...

The last time we saw Andy was when he was seeing visions. What do those visions mean?

Andy ran out of the bathroom as quickly as possible! He ran all the way to the auditorium, so freaked by the writing that he ran into his math teacher, Mr. Schnieder! Andy quickly said sorry and went to get his picture taken. After, he talked to his friends at P.E., "That was that! I was so freaked out by it that my heart was going to run out of my chest!" All of a sudden, they heard a big KABOOM! Everyone on the PE. turned to look. They all saw a gigantic red mushroom cloud and everyone stared, then ran. At least everyone but the three friends. I feel like I should run, but something was telling me to stay, Andy thought. Andy saw a dust cloud, the size of a herd of elephants rush toward him. There was a guy, all in black walking through the dust, is he in trouble? Andy asked himself. I have to go save him, quickly urging himself to run, but he just couldn't. There was a force, unlike gravity, willing me to stay right here, why me?, thought Andy in panic and terror. Jake's survival instincts kicked into high gear. He took of the net of one of the volleyball courts and told Jordan to take the other side. Together, they wrapped Andy up and quickly got him out of danger. Once Andy was far away, he could move his body and told his friends about the guy in the dust storm. They thought he was crazy, but Andy was so sure of himself that he kept telling them it was true! A stream of light came from where the mushroom was and once again, everyone was back on the regular P.E. yard.

Later that day...


Andy was walking home from school to his house on 24th street. As he turned the corner, he heard sirens and his mom yelling at the people inside her house. "I have people rights! I know of John Locke's belief in society!" (She said most of those in Zaplin. She only moved here a few years ago. She hasn't learned very much, only the essentials. She also didn't want to give up her old ways on her country, so she barely went out. Andy had to translate for her.) Andy ran the rest of the way. He saw the FBI, police, ambulances, family, close friends that are technically family, neighbors, and even his dad. Not even this many of his family came for his birthday. The most ever was 10 people. He asked the nearest police officer what happened and he said that there was some mysterious break-in. It consisted of a man in all black, About 5'3 and moved incredibly fast. Andy's face got beet red and he started to think, why would someone be out to find me?

Thank you guys so much for reading this! I get really excited when someone reads my story and when someone comments! Who was the man in all black, and what was up with that explosion?! Can you answer Andy's thought? I'll see you later! Stay awesome!

Friday, September 18, 2015

The Story

A good story can all start with a bad beginning. 

I was fighting the evil math homework! Numbers, and letters in math?! This is impossible! I fended off all the voices that kept saying. Do it, do it!! Then, I heard a new voice. It said wake up! Wake up!! Then I woke up with a start hitting my head on something wooden. Oh, right... I have to share my room with my brother. Thought Andy. He turned to his right and heard the alarm clock going wake up! Wake up! Just my luck, thought Andy, my little brother pranked me again. Just the thought made him laugh with joy! He loved his little brother's pranks! Time to get ready, thought Andy.

Andy arrived to school and saw his friends, Jordan and Jake. Jordan didn't mind hanging out with boys. She loved to mess with Jake. Jake was like a little brother to her, even though she already had and annoying one. Jake was a survivalist. He was always prepared and was very good at debating as well as distracting people. Jordan and Jake waved to Andy, Jordan purposely hit Jake playfully on the head as she waved. "Hi guys!" shouted Andy. "What's up, knucklehead?" asked Jake and Jordan. Andy told them about his brother's joke. Both of them laughed until the bell rang. Suddenly, they were over come with grief. They had math. But at math, a surprise was waiting for them.

Mr. Schnieder, the math teacher, told them it was picture day. Andy looked at Jordan, Jordan looked at Jake, and Jake looked at Andy. They all forgot! Oh well, Andy thought, it won't look bad, they only do head shots. When they walked over to the auditorium, they saw a photo booth set up. The three friends looked at each other in confusion. Huh?, thought Andy, this doesn't make sense. He shook his head and then saw a guy, in his late thirty's for sure, talking to the class about pictures. Andy asked to be excused to go to the bathroom and saw the words: You are DEAD to me on the wall. He again shook his head and it was gone. What happened to the words and where did they come from? Andy thought to himself?

Please leave what you think will happen next and why Andy is having strange visions, Thank you!


Friday, September 11, 2015

Did I make you curious? Stay on this page to find out more about me.
Hi! my name is Alana and as most of you know, I can be really crazy! I'm also full of lots of energy! I love writing stories! I'm currently an 8th grader and want EVERYONE to be happy! I love pushed, abushu, croutons, and Roman Atwood and his vlogs! (If you don't know him, look him up on YouTube!) I play basketball and volleyball. I love being helpful! I hope that my blogs will put things into perspective or just plain make you smile. I want to see how many views (or likes, this is my first time here) we can get every blog to! I'll be posting every week. this week, I will post another one.
-Alana