Wednesday, September 23, 2015

The visions (the part 2 of The Story)

Disclaimer: Thanks to the seven people that looked at my last blog! You guys are awesome! Now, time for the story...

The last time we saw Andy was when he was seeing visions. What do those visions mean?

Andy ran out of the bathroom as quickly as possible! He ran all the way to the auditorium, so freaked by the writing that he ran into his math teacher, Mr. Schnieder! Andy quickly said sorry and went to get his picture taken. After, he talked to his friends at P.E., "That was that! I was so freaked out by it that my heart was going to run out of my chest!" All of a sudden, they heard a big KABOOM! Everyone on the PE. turned to look. They all saw a gigantic red mushroom cloud and everyone stared, then ran. At least everyone but the three friends. I feel like I should run, but something was telling me to stay, Andy thought. Andy saw a dust cloud, the size of a herd of elephants rush toward him. There was a guy, all in black walking through the dust, is he in trouble? Andy asked himself. I have to go save him, quickly urging himself to run, but he just couldn't. There was a force, unlike gravity, willing me to stay right here, why me?, thought Andy in panic and terror. Jake's survival instincts kicked into high gear. He took of the net of one of the volleyball courts and told Jordan to take the other side. Together, they wrapped Andy up and quickly got him out of danger. Once Andy was far away, he could move his body and told his friends about the guy in the dust storm. They thought he was crazy, but Andy was so sure of himself that he kept telling them it was true! A stream of light came from where the mushroom was and once again, everyone was back on the regular P.E. yard.

Later that day...


Andy was walking home from school to his house on 24th street. As he turned the corner, he heard sirens and his mom yelling at the people inside her house. "I have people rights! I know of John Locke's belief in society!" (She said most of those in Zaplin. She only moved here a few years ago. She hasn't learned very much, only the essentials. She also didn't want to give up her old ways on her country, so she barely went out. Andy had to translate for her.) Andy ran the rest of the way. He saw the FBI, police, ambulances, family, close friends that are technically family, neighbors, and even his dad. Not even this many of his family came for his birthday. The most ever was 10 people. He asked the nearest police officer what happened and he said that there was some mysterious break-in. It consisted of a man in all black, About 5'3 and moved incredibly fast. Andy's face got beet red and he started to think, why would someone be out to find me?

Thank you guys so much for reading this! I get really excited when someone reads my story and when someone comments! Who was the man in all black, and what was up with that explosion?! Can you answer Andy's thought? I'll see you later! Stay awesome!

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