Last time we saw Andy was at his house talking to a police man about the guy in all black.
Andy carefully sneaked away from the crowd. He looked around his house carefully for clues, careful not to get caught. When he couldn't find anything downstairs, he went upstairs. He checked everywhere but his room. I wonder if he left anything in here, thought Andy. Of course he did, thought Andy, sarcastically. On the wall was a note attached to the wall with a bloody arrow. Andy put the arrow in the plastic bag and read the note. It said: You will never find me, I will always find you. You didn't help me, so I abandoned you. You are very dead to me. So if you don't get the things at the bottom of this list, I will kill innocent people by recreating some of the worst possible disasters and make them worst just for you! It was signed with the initials JRC at the bottom along with the list: a sea man's beard, the hat of a king, and the gun of a soldier. JRC?, thought Andy, who could that be? I'll just have to show Jake and Jordan tomorrow and see what they think. Then, he heard foot steps down the hall and quickly hid in his closet.
"Finally, a good place to talk. Now, let's talk about the plan."
"Okay, Jorge, but we aren't going to say anything."
"Yeah! Not say anything!"
"After everyone leaves, we are going to burn this place to the ground. There is to much evidence around here! It'll give him away!"
"Let's do it at 12:00! No person will be up at that time! Take guns too to shoot anyone that sees us! And make sure they are dead!"
More footsteps.
"Quick! Act like you are searching the place!"
Oh no!, thought Andy, they are going to find me!
What will happen to Andy? Will he get caught? Who is JRC? Find out in the next story! As Roman Atwood would say: "Smile more!".
Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Wednesday, September 23, 2015
The visions (the part 2 of The Story)
Disclaimer: Thanks to the seven people that looked at my last blog! You guys are awesome! Now, time for the story...
The last time we saw Andy was when he was seeing visions. What do those visions mean?
Andy ran out of the bathroom as quickly as possible! He ran all the way to the auditorium, so freaked by the writing that he ran into his math teacher, Mr. Schnieder! Andy quickly said sorry and went to get his picture taken. After, he talked to his friends at P.E., "That was that! I was so freaked out by it that my heart was going to run out of my chest!" All of a sudden, they heard a big KABOOM! Everyone on the PE. turned to look. They all saw a gigantic red mushroom cloud and everyone stared, then ran. At least everyone but the three friends. I feel like I should run, but something was telling me to stay, Andy thought. Andy saw a dust cloud, the size of a herd of elephants rush toward him. There was a guy, all in black walking through the dust, is he in trouble? Andy asked himself. I have to go save him, quickly urging himself to run, but he just couldn't. There was a force, unlike gravity, willing me to stay right here, why me?, thought Andy in panic and terror. Jake's survival instincts kicked into high gear. He took of the net of one of the volleyball courts and told Jordan to take the other side. Together, they wrapped Andy up and quickly got him out of danger. Once Andy was far away, he could move his body and told his friends about the guy in the dust storm. They thought he was crazy, but Andy was so sure of himself that he kept telling them it was true! A stream of light came from where the mushroom was and once again, everyone was back on the regular P.E. yard.
Later that day...
Thank you guys so much for reading this! I get really excited when someone reads my story and when someone comments! Who was the man in all black, and what was up with that explosion?! Can you answer Andy's thought? I'll see you later! Stay awesome!
The last time we saw Andy was when he was seeing visions. What do those visions mean?
Andy ran out of the bathroom as quickly as possible! He ran all the way to the auditorium, so freaked by the writing that he ran into his math teacher, Mr. Schnieder! Andy quickly said sorry and went to get his picture taken. After, he talked to his friends at P.E., "That was that! I was so freaked out by it that my heart was going to run out of my chest!" All of a sudden, they heard a big KABOOM! Everyone on the PE. turned to look. They all saw a gigantic red mushroom cloud and everyone stared, then ran. At least everyone but the three friends. I feel like I should run, but something was telling me to stay, Andy thought. Andy saw a dust cloud, the size of a herd of elephants rush toward him. There was a guy, all in black walking through the dust, is he in trouble? Andy asked himself. I have to go save him, quickly urging himself to run, but he just couldn't. There was a force, unlike gravity, willing me to stay right here, why me?, thought Andy in panic and terror. Jake's survival instincts kicked into high gear. He took of the net of one of the volleyball courts and told Jordan to take the other side. Together, they wrapped Andy up and quickly got him out of danger. Once Andy was far away, he could move his body and told his friends about the guy in the dust storm. They thought he was crazy, but Andy was so sure of himself that he kept telling them it was true! A stream of light came from where the mushroom was and once again, everyone was back on the regular P.E. yard.
Later that day...
Andy was walking home from school to his house on 24th street. As he turned the corner, he heard sirens and his mom yelling at the people inside her house. "I have people rights! I know of John Locke's belief in society!" (She said most of those in Zaplin. She only moved here a few years ago. She hasn't learned very much, only the essentials. She also didn't want to give up her old ways on her country, so she barely went out. Andy had to translate for her.) Andy ran the rest of the way. He saw the FBI, police, ambulances, family, close friends that are technically family, neighbors, and even his dad. Not even this many of his family came for his birthday. The most ever was 10 people. He asked the nearest police officer what happened and he said that there was some mysterious break-in. It consisted of a man in all black, About 5'3 and moved incredibly fast. Andy's face got beet red and he started to think, why would someone be out to find me?
Thank you guys so much for reading this! I get really excited when someone reads my story and when someone comments! Who was the man in all black, and what was up with that explosion?! Can you answer Andy's thought? I'll see you later! Stay awesome!
Friday, September 18, 2015
The Story
A good story can all start with a bad beginning.
I was fighting the evil math homework! Numbers, and letters in math?! This is impossible! I fended off all the voices that kept saying. Do it, do it!! Then, I heard a new voice. It said wake up! Wake up!! Then I woke up with a start hitting my head on something wooden. Oh, right... I have to share my room with my brother. Thought Andy. He turned to his right and heard the alarm clock going wake up! Wake up! Just my luck, thought Andy, my little brother pranked me again. Just the thought made him laugh with joy! He loved his little brother's pranks! Time to get ready, thought Andy.
Andy arrived to school and saw his friends, Jordan and Jake. Jordan didn't mind hanging out with boys. She loved to mess with Jake. Jake was like a little brother to her, even though she already had and annoying one. Jake was a survivalist. He was always prepared and was very good at debating as well as distracting people. Jordan and Jake waved to Andy, Jordan purposely hit Jake playfully on the head as she waved. "Hi guys!" shouted Andy. "What's up, knucklehead?" asked Jake and Jordan. Andy told them about his brother's joke. Both of them laughed until the bell rang. Suddenly, they were over come with grief. They had math. But at math, a surprise was waiting for them.
Mr. Schnieder, the math teacher, told them it was picture day. Andy looked at Jordan, Jordan looked at Jake, and Jake looked at Andy. They all forgot! Oh well, Andy thought, it won't look bad, they only do head shots. When they walked over to the auditorium, they saw a photo booth set up. The three friends looked at each other in confusion. Huh?, thought Andy, this doesn't make sense. He shook his head and then saw a guy, in his late thirty's for sure, talking to the class about pictures. Andy asked to be excused to go to the bathroom and saw the words: You are DEAD to me on the wall. He again shook his head and it was gone. What happened to the words and where did they come from? Andy thought to himself?
Please leave what you think will happen next and why Andy is having strange visions, Thank you!
Andy arrived to school and saw his friends, Jordan and Jake. Jordan didn't mind hanging out with boys. She loved to mess with Jake. Jake was like a little brother to her, even though she already had and annoying one. Jake was a survivalist. He was always prepared and was very good at debating as well as distracting people. Jordan and Jake waved to Andy, Jordan purposely hit Jake playfully on the head as she waved. "Hi guys!" shouted Andy. "What's up, knucklehead?" asked Jake and Jordan. Andy told them about his brother's joke. Both of them laughed until the bell rang. Suddenly, they were over come with grief. They had math. But at math, a surprise was waiting for them.
Mr. Schnieder, the math teacher, told them it was picture day. Andy looked at Jordan, Jordan looked at Jake, and Jake looked at Andy. They all forgot! Oh well, Andy thought, it won't look bad, they only do head shots. When they walked over to the auditorium, they saw a photo booth set up. The three friends looked at each other in confusion. Huh?, thought Andy, this doesn't make sense. He shook his head and then saw a guy, in his late thirty's for sure, talking to the class about pictures. Andy asked to be excused to go to the bathroom and saw the words: You are DEAD to me on the wall. He again shook his head and it was gone. What happened to the words and where did they come from? Andy thought to himself?
Please leave what you think will happen next and why Andy is having strange visions, Thank you!
Friday, September 11, 2015
Did I make you curious? Stay on this page to find out more about me.
Hi! my name is Alana and as most of you know, I can be really crazy! I'm also full of lots of energy! I love writing stories! I'm currently an 8th grader and want EVERYONE to be happy! I love pushed, abushu, croutons, and Roman Atwood and his vlogs! (If you don't know him, look him up on YouTube!) I play basketball and volleyball. I love being helpful! I hope that my blogs will put things into perspective or just plain make you smile. I want to see how many views (or likes, this is my first time here) we can get every blog to! I'll be posting every week. this week, I will post another one.
-Alana
Hi! my name is Alana and as most of you know, I can be really crazy! I'm also full of lots of energy! I love writing stories! I'm currently an 8th grader and want EVERYONE to be happy! I love pushed, abushu, croutons, and Roman Atwood and his vlogs! (If you don't know him, look him up on YouTube!) I play basketball and volleyball. I love being helpful! I hope that my blogs will put things into perspective or just plain make you smile. I want to see how many views (or likes, this is my first time here) we can get every blog to! I'll be posting every week. this week, I will post another one.
-Alana
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